Man I really think you guys are so close to something truly incredible. The first moment I was suddenly tiny and a big unique scene happened in front of me with a jeering narrator, I had to pause in shock! It was quite cool.
That being said I think this definitely deserves more work! Here is some feedback for the future:
I think the maze needs to be more engaging. As it stands I have no idea where to go, and I mostly just wander randomly for a while until something happens. I think there needs to be a little more engagement. More for me to do. Perhaps hints of directions to go, or riddles, or just interesting pieces of art.
The narrator needs work. I think there are brief moments where it really, really works and I love it. But mostly it becomes a sort of background noise. I think perhaps a little more responsive of a narrator, and probably a little briefer, would rock.
I want lore. This is a personal preference. But what the hell happened here and where am I? The art is so impressive that I must know more about it.
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I love the artwork!
Man I really think you guys are so close to something truly incredible. The first moment I was suddenly tiny and a big unique scene happened in front of me with a jeering narrator, I had to pause in shock! It was quite cool.
That being said I think this definitely deserves more work! Here is some feedback for the future:
I think the maze needs to be more engaging. As it stands I have no idea where to go, and I mostly just wander randomly for a while until something happens. I think there needs to be a little more engagement. More for me to do. Perhaps hints of directions to go, or riddles, or just interesting pieces of art.
The narrator needs work. I think there are brief moments where it really, really works and I love it. But mostly it becomes a sort of background noise. I think perhaps a little more responsive of a narrator, and probably a little briefer, would rock.
I want lore. This is a personal preference. But what the hell happened here and where am I? The art is so impressive that I must know more about it.
Great work all!